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Hey everybody! As you can see from the title, we hit 1,000 views! I know it seems like a low number, but for me, that's pretty cool!!! Thank you all so much for viewing my blog and saying such kind words!

I can't thank everyone enough! Today I decided to continue the story that I have been posting about! (Visit here for part one and part two.)
I get up slowly and look around. Hope's room? Why am I in here? "I'm hereee!" a voice singsongs. I turn around to see a woman, a little taller than me. She's wearing a t-shirt with polka dots on them and a vest over it. She's also wearing dark blue jeans and sneakers. "Who are you? Why are you here??" I ask. "I am Valarie, and I'm here to help you!" She says cheerfully. "Whaa... but, what do you do???" I look around again, but everything is blurry except Valarie. "Well, you see, I can go into the past. And you know... help people fix stuff by telling them what's right and wrong." She sounded a bit off during that last sentence, but who cares? She can help me get Hope back!
"So what do I do?" I ask impatiently. The sooner me and Hope are friends, the better. "Well... you could be a bit more careful? And out of the blue, say sorry for all the things you broke. Could help." Once she said her last words, she started disappearing, but the blurriness was going away. "What do you wanna do?" asked Hope. I look around her room. Everything was fine, nothing broken. "Maybe let's play a game. Also, I'm so sorry about any of the fights or things I have broken in the past. I hope you forgive me." She looked at me strangely, but came closer and whispered something in my ear. "You really believe she's gonna solve all your problems? Think again."
Thanks for reading everyone! I was gonna do 3 paragraphs, but I thought it would be mysterious to leave it at this point. Thank you again for supporting and viewing my blog. See everyone later!
I get up slowly and look around. Hope's room? Why am I in here? "I'm hereee!" a voice singsongs. I turn around to see a woman, a little taller than me. She's wearing a t-shirt with polka dots on them and a vest over it. She's also wearing dark blue jeans and sneakers. "Who are you? Why are you here??" I ask. "I am Valarie, and I'm here to help you!" She says cheerfully. "Whaa... but, what do you do???" I look around again, but everything is blurry except Valarie. "Well, you see, I can go into the past. And you know... help people fix stuff by telling them what's right and wrong." She sounded a bit off during that last sentence, but who cares? She can help me get Hope back!
"So what do I do?" I ask impatiently. The sooner me and Hope are friends, the better. "Well... you could be a bit more careful? And out of the blue, say sorry for all the things you broke. Could help." Once she said her last words, she started disappearing, but the blurriness was going away. "What do you wanna do?" asked Hope. I look around her room. Everything was fine, nothing broken. "Maybe let's play a game. Also, I'm so sorry about any of the fights or things I have broken in the past. I hope you forgive me." She looked at me strangely, but came closer and whispered something in my ear. "You really believe she's gonna solve all your problems? Think again."
Thanks for reading everyone! I was gonna do 3 paragraphs, but I thought it would be mysterious to leave it at this point. Thank you again for supporting and viewing my blog. See everyone later!
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Muchas felicidades por esas 1000 visitas, veras como cada vez vienen mas. Besos
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm glad to the people who view my blog :)
DeleteCongratulations!
ReplyDeleteCongrats!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine!
DeleteNice! Congrats
ReplyDeleteYeah, thanks!
DeleteWow.... That's a HUGE CLIFFANGER!!!!!! Can't wait for the next part :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Savi! I'm also wondering what's gonna happen!
DeleteDun dun dun...
I wish you much success in the future! 😊
ReplyDeleteI like the excerpt from the story. It's an interesting idea.
Thanks Diana! I am very glad that I started this blog. Have an amazing week :)
DeleteWell done, congratulations.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Thank you Jan!
DeleteFelicidades por las visitas de poquito en poquito harás mas. Te mando un beso
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteOMG what will happen next! That is exciting writing.
ReplyDeleteAnd well done on the views :-D
Thank you for both Ananka! :)
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